Wednesday, April 22, 2015

Kasir Moton
Engw _1100
Professor Young
 23 April, 2015

These Hands Don’t Hurt
One in four women will experience domestic violence during her lifetime. So imagine out of your mom, sister, aunt, and grandmother one of them has experienced domestic abuse. Domestic abuse is when an intimate partner establishes power and control over another person through fear and intimidation, often including the threat or use of violence. Scary, right?  I know it is. Domestic abuse has been around for a long time. According to the New Jersey Battered Women Service, last year in 2014, four million women were physically assaulted by their partners. Due to the fact that the victims don’t want to speak up in fear of hurting their loved ones, millions of women keep quiet and continue to let the abuse happen. But not anymore- help me help those who need a hand and who are voiceless. Dr. King stood up for the voiceless, poor African American citizens who were being shipped off into war. The reason why he stood up for them is so they could become inspired to standup for themselves. Similarly, family and friends have to stick up for victims of domestic violence so that they can become inspired to stand up for themselves. The right time to speak up and break the silence is when your life or safety is at risk.
A wise man Dr. Martin Luther King, once stated in his speech" Beyond Vietnam" that “The great initiative in this war is ours; the initiative to stop it must be ours” (King). His words show that in order to stop the war, people must have the willpower and initiative to stop it. Dr. King was speaking for the people in Vietnam who were suffering from wasted land, homes being destroyed and cultures being subverted from the war. Dr. King also spoke for the poor people in America (and by poor I mean the American citizens who were shipped off and forced to fight in the Vietnam war, the blacks ,and all the poor) who were paying ,the double price of smashed hopes from dealing with the corruption in Vietnam. Dr. King spoke up and expressed his opinion that America was “adding cynicism to the death process” in Vietnam (King).
Similarly, for domestic abuse to come to an end, initiative has to be taken.  Women in domestically violent situations often find a way to justify their significant other’s actions by giving excuses for why the abuse is happening. For example, women who are being abused may say “It only happens when he drinks … has a bad day…or when the house isn’t clean.” And when this happens battered women often say “He didn’t mean it … I’ll say something next time… he said he was sorry.” Women become vulnerable because what do they do when the person they love is hurting them emotionally, physically and mentally? It results in a woman being stripped of everything which leads to the death of a woman’s pride, morals, and self-esteem. Moreover, domestic abuse is the right time to speak up and break the silence because most instances of domestic violence are never reported.
Although I am not a woman or know what domestic abuse feels like, I do know firsthand the hardship it brings because my mother was a victim for a short period of her life. I was only thirteen at the time and I was living with my mother and her boyfriend. I was upstairs in my room playing my new video game NCAA football 2005 when I heard the loud sound of pots being slammed around. At first, I didn’t really think anything of it. I thought my mom was being clumsy as always. Moments later, I heard my mom yell, “Fuck this! I don’t have time, I have to go to work.”  I ran downstairs to see what was going on and I saw my mom on the floor. I stood back to see what was going on and I saw my mother’s boyfriend punch my mom twice in the side.
From that point on, my heart began to ache for my mom. I didn’t know what to do when I saw the tears pour down my mom face. She glimpsed up and saw me and yelled,  “ Get off of me my son is right there” and after that he grabbed her up by the collar of her black North Face jacket and tossed her back to the ground. I ran at him crying tears of anger and jumped on his back ripping the left sleeve of his blue collard polo shirt and then tried to choke him but I was immediately swung off and thrown to the wall. He stormed out the front door and my mom came running after me and said, “It was my fault, okay.  Next time let me handle it okay? I love you and I don’t want you to worry about what just happen okay? Don’t call your dad or anyone okay? This stays in this household.”
 I wiped my mom’s face off and told her you didn’t hit me when I was kid so I’m not going let anyone do it to you. My mom went off to work and I stood in the house. It was silent for the whole day; I was home alone until eight when my mom got off from work. My mom was at work and called my grandmother and told her what happened. My grandmother came up to the house the next morning with my dad and uncles and my aunt and the rest was out of my hands. I don’t remember what happened after that but I was told it was taken care of. The police were involved and I haven’t seem him since. This goes to show that staying quiet doesn’t help anything. Staying quiet make things worse, so stand up for what is right and break the silence when your life is at risk. So help change that, and speak up, speak out, and make a difference for victims of domestic violence because a lot of women’s lives are at risk.
In summary, keeping your mouth shut isn’t always good in life. There is a reason why people in this world should speak up for themselves or for others who can’t necessarily speak up for themselves. Unlike my mom, there are women who can’t find the voice to be heard because they don’t have the courage or support to speak up. Women in this world are being abused mentally and physically. So help me help them find a voice by calling the New Jersey battered women service hotline at 973-267-7520. They care and take initiative to protect the battered women who fall to abuse every day, so we can let women know that our hands don’t hurt. It’s okay to speak up and break the silence.
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Work Cited
King, Martin Luther. "Beyond Vietnam."Riverside  Church, New York, NY. 15 April  

1967.   Speech.

Thursday, March 26, 2015

Kasir Moton
Professor Young
Engw_1100
10 February 2015
Identity
             In the passage “How to Tame a Wild Tongue” by Gloria Anzaldula, she states that language shapes who you are and how you need to persevere though your own struggles within any given environment. She was told that the language she wanted to speak was wrong for that environment and to be considered proper she would have to adapt to this new setting and language. From this, I came to the realization that your identity isn't a single notion such as language, but it can be anything that you believe shapes who you are and what you aspire to be. Anzadula was oftentimes told that she had to change who she was, which made it difficult for her to be herself since she felt as though she had to hide from who she really was. It was as if she was being stripped of her identity because she was pretending to be someone who she was not. “Wild tongues can’t be tamed; they can only be cut out (Anzaldula 246)”. Anzadula said this quote to mean that people in this world do not accept change very well and that they will not change unless they are willing to. When I think of identity the first thing I think of is my individuality. My individuality can be defined by all the different facets that compose who I am. I am a great listener, I am outgoing, I have a comical side, but the one quality that defines me the most is that I am willing to work hard for the things that I want. I wanted to better myself, and even through all the hardships I told myself I needed to go to college to do so.
            Everyone is different in this world; every individual in this world has their own idea of what identity means to them. And as for me, my meaning of identity is my personality with my outgoing ways. In the passage Anzadula grandmother tells her that “flies don’t enter a closed mouth" (Anzadula246). Which I can relate to because as a child my grandmother said the exact same quote to me before entering church on Sunday. Growing up I was always told, “It’s better to be seen not heard” by my family and peers. This would be said to me due to the fact that my personality was too strong for some people. I was talkative and very outgoing which allowed me to meet a lot of people. I had an opinion about everything and wasn't afraid to speak my mind.
During my eighth grade year, I switched from a performing arts school to a regular public school. When I arrived my first day in class we had to work in groups and finish an assignment. I quickly grabbed the paper and began to start my work. I began to tell the students in my group how to go about the problems. After doing that for some time, a couple of students who were in my group started to look at me funny and saying, “the new kid thinks he's the boss”. I was always questioning things after someone told me something and always felt the necessity to add my point of view to any given discussion. This is just who I am, and I could never change that, for that is my identity.
Just as Anzadula had her language to define her, so too I had my personality to define mine. “My “home” tongues are the languages I speak with my sister and brothers with six-seven being closest to my heart” (Anzadula, 248). Anzadula loves to speak Chicano Spanish and Tex-Mex because it was what she was raised on and so had a personal connection to it. I share the same passion she had with wanting to speak her language by striving to be the best I can be and standing up for what I believe in just as Gloria Anzadula did when she stood up for herself to speak the language she wants to. Anzadula speaks different languages like tex- mex, Chicano Spanish and other sorts of languages. The people around her tried to break her down and break her habit of speaking other languages but they did not succeed.

Those individuals that tried to stop Anzadula from being herself, only aided her to want to be more individualistic. My individuality has set me up in right direction in life. I’m a full time college student and this is what I’ve been striving for since the sixth grade. During my life I’ve met so many people and only few are closed to me. I grew up in a rough neighborhood where not a lot of people make it out. It was scary having to hear gunshots at nights and sirens every day, but that didn’t change me, that only made me stronger and wanted to get away from that.
I had four friends that I grew up with. We would always be outside together after our parents realized they couldn't keep us locked inside forever. We would just hang around the block with the older kids doing whatever it was to do that day. I was around gangs, drugs, and violence around this time but I understood as an athlete I couldn’t take part in any of those things. So I realized that and implemented that into my schedule. At that time, it got me away from all the negative aspects but was able to keep my friends. They had respect for me enough not to bring those things around me, but not enough for themselves. This is why my only real four friends are facing four to seven years in a county prison. I was called out for being “fake” by the other teens in the neighborhood that I know, for not being In the streets, and being so engaged in football, but it wasn't my fault. I am who I am and I know right from wrong. I want a better life for myself and stick to my beliefs, and the way my individuality shapes into my identity is okay with me.
No one in this world has the same identity or the same aspirations in life. You can have your own meaning of identity or what you believe makes you the person you are today, but make sure you stand up for who you are just like Gloria Anzadula did when it came to her native language that she speaks. People around her tried to break her habits of speaking the way she does but she didn't let them because she is her language and her language is her identity. Just as I’m an outgoing person who is charismatic and loves to listen to people. This shapes my individuality and how I believe I am my own person. So if you want to try to steal my identity good luck because my individuality is me and there’s only one me.












Work Cited
Anzaldua, Gloria. “How to Tame a Wild Tongue.” The North Anthology of American
Literature. 7th edition, vol E. Eds. Jerome Klinkowitz and Patricia B. Luallace. 
New York: Norton, 2007.Work cited